Comments on Life, Love, & Lies: Breaking Point

Ah man, my heart broke for Ivy. it's a horribl...

2010-10-07T05:28:23.835-04:00

Ah man, my heart broke for Ivy. it's a horrible situation she's found herself in, allowing herself to be used like that. As much as I love Nico, I could help but think what an asshole he is in this one.

And though I don't agree with Thad's questionable business interests, I'm glad he's put a lid on Sienna's free-loading lifestyle. About time she learned the hard facts of life, and maybe get a proper job!

Slowly catching up :)

Hey S@ndy, You are exactly right. Ivy got a raw ...

2010-02-12T20:49:22.479-05:00

Hey S@ndy,

You are exactly right. Ivy got a raw deal and Sienna got just what she deserved. Ivy is devasted and she's not going to go away quietly at all. She put a lot of time and love into her relationship with Nico and has nothing to show for it but a broken heart. She's going to return the favor.

Sienna has a lot of growing to do and somehow I don't know if Gunther is strong enough to make her do it without giving into her childish demands. His love for her might only make things worse.

Thanks so much for reading and commenting. I'm so glad you are back.

Oh Poor Ivy, seriously I do feel kind of sorry fo...

2010-02-02T13:27:06.957-05:00

Oh Poor Ivy, seriously I do feel kind of sorry for her.
but I don't feel sorry for Sienna, I think she needs to grow up a little bit and this might just be her opportunity to do so. Hopefully she won't give Gunther lots of trouble...

going back to Ivy, I wonder what is she going to do now? I doubt she will sit down and cry while Nico lives his happily ever after with Isabella.

He did treat her bad... she is feeling used, betrayed and hurt, a woman feeling like that is indeed a ticking-time bomb.

Good luck to those two.

Can't wait to read another one!!

2010-01-04T15:04:24.131-05:00

Can't wait to read another one!!

Thank you xtina. I try to be descriptive without g...

2010-01-03T23:37:00.086-05:00

Thank you xtina. I try to be descriptive without going overboard (which I can do sometimes). I'm glad you like it. I've also been trying to really take my time with the shots and capture more emotion, so I'm glad you like them too.

Ivy does have a really good heart which is why she has stuck it out with Nico for so long, but he's crossed her now so all bets are off. She's definately going to make him regret what he's done.

Thanks again for reading and commenting.

muzegoddess, first, I haven't read many of you...

2009-12-31T14:06:44.421-05:00

muzegoddess,
first, I haven't read many of your stories, but I'm familiar with some of your characters and your writing skill, both of which gave me goosebumps in this update. I cannot express in words your ability to detail situations, the imagery is incredible.

also, the angles in some of your screens, esp the close-ups speak "1000 words."

I love Ivy, btw. she's incredibly, simply pretty. something about her yields a calm demeanor, but I have a feeling underneath that porcelain appearance, she's a ticking time bomb..guess we'll find out..

LOL, Sinclair you at toooo funny. I guess this is...

2009-12-30T20:47:39.161-05:00

LOL, Sinclair you at toooo funny. I guess this is like the OC on HBO (cursing, nudity, adult situations). Yes, Nico did take things a lot futher than he intended to but when that nasty side of him comes out he really turns into a monster. Occupational hazard I guess.

Unlike Ivy, Sienna absolutely deserved to get kicked out, she's been itching for it for a long time. As far as money goes, Sienna has (or had) access to the family bank accounts which are all controlled by Thad so once he cuts her off she is essentially penniless. All she has now is her car, clothes, and jewelery so she is definately ass out.

She's isn't accustomed to solving her own problems so while it might take her a minute, she is definately going to get back at Thad for this.

Thanks for reading; I'm glad you are getting addicted :)

Ok sooo another amazing chapter. I feel like I'...

2009-12-30T18:14:19.367-05:00

Ok sooo another amazing chapter. I feel like I'm watching The O.C on HBO. And I love it.

Nico is an ass. I understand you've got the love of your life back and everything. Thats great. But to be well aware of Ivy's feelings, manipulate them so she will be your personal vault, screw her when you dont wanna do it urself, and then dump her andd evict her at the same time is just way to much. Its totally unessecary. He didnt have to be so cruel to her. She didnt deserve that. He could have told her they were done and let her keep the house. Its not like he cant afford it. So I have no pity for him when she fucks him over. He totally deserves whatever she brings.

Sienna is a bratty bitch. But so is Thad. I'm excited to see this war of theirs begin. Who can outdo who. This is gonna be really good. Does Sienna have any money of her own? Was there an inheritance? Or just the business Thad took over.

I'm really beggining to adore your story. Its addictive.

Thank you Mao :) You are exactly right about Ivy....

2009-12-30T15:03:33.577-05:00

Thank you Mao :)

You are exactly right about Ivy. Whether it was "healthy" or not she is pissed that her "relationship" with Nico is over. She doesn't know all of his secrets, but she certainly knows enough of them to hurt him. He is just arrogant enough to believe she would never do it. Unfortunately he is wrong and this will not end well when he realizes it.

Sienna is a brat and as nasty as Thad is she deserved to get kicked out on her butt. What she ends up doing...we'll see. But make no mistake she too is pissed about this situation.

Thank you for reading the commenting. I always love to hear what you think.

I feel kind of bad for Ivy. Perhaps more than I s...

2009-12-30T13:59:49.010-05:00

I feel kind of bad for Ivy. Perhaps more than I should, but that's a crappy situation to be in. Nico is a volatile dude, though, so maybe it's for the best. She can find someone a bit more... stable? LOL But we know that won't happen. A woman scorned is a bad, bad thing... a woman scorned who ALSO knows your secrets? Much worse.

I don't blame Thad. No one wants to come home with the police hanging out at your front door! Definitely a shock. I'm not sure how I feel about Sienna yet, I'm more curious as to what she's going to do than anything...

Loved the beach shots! I never have beaches or beach houses in my stories, so I love looking at everyone else's... not to mention all the little details. Wonderful!

Hey Beth, Thank you so much for the compliments I...

2009-12-30T10:55:12.934-05:00

Hey Beth,

Thank you so much for the compliments I really wasn't sure about some of the shots because by the end I was just rushing to get this done. Glad they look good to you.

Sienna can be a whinner and a little wimpy at times but she is also angry about this (not that she has a right to be) and she is not going to roll over and play dead. She's definately going to get Thad back for this.

And Thad is definately wrong about Issy's situation. He's counting his chickens before they hatch and he is in for a very very rude awakening.

Thanks again for reading, commenting, and always being so supportive.

Happy New Year!!

Hi Gayl, I thought it would be fitting to end the...

2009-12-30T10:10:42.365-05:00

Hi Gayl,

I thought it would be fitting to end the year by tying up these two loose ends. Out with old and in with the new.

Neither of these ladies are going to take this lying down and the results are going to be explosive in Ivy's case. Sienna's first instinct is to whine about everything and she's going to go to the only person who'll listen to that....Gunther. But this is an opportunity for her to grow so we'll see what happens.

I wish I could say I edited Ivy's hair but I am not talented in that respect. I know that it came in a set that I picked up somewhere (don't remember off hand), I'll take a look when I get home and let you know.

As always thank you so much for reading and commenting.

WOW WOW WOW!!! Go Nico go!! Ok Ivy has every rea...

2009-12-30T08:21:36.147-05:00

WOW WOW WOW!!!

Go Nico go!! Ok Ivy has every reason to feel ill used, and she was, but the man had to make a choice.

and it was about time someone dumped Sienna on her high maintenance ass! She's not going down easy though, is she? Love the cliff hanger!!

I cannot wait to see Thad try to muscle Isabella. Daddy's little princess indeed. I don't think so.

As always, your shots, the color, the composition, are incredible! I love that first shot, and the shot outside Thad's house with the cruisers all parked every which way in the street.

Wonderful, taut, fast paced and powerful writing!!

What a fantastic update! Two women kicked to the c...

2009-12-30T03:48:14.073-05:00

What a fantastic update! Two women kicked to the curb and I doubt either of them is going to quietly take it.

I can't wait to see the expression on Thad's face when he realizes that Isabella is not some whimpering little girl. I just love the strong women you have in your world.

What an amazing job with your shots! I hope you don't mind if I ask but did you edit Ivy's hair? I have that but the bangs are much much more in the eye.